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But who's teaching who? ;) More Aurora and Kurt love for :iconsuzene:!
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The lighting doesn't seem consistent: on one hand it seems like the light comes directly from behind Nightcrawler, but then you see the shadow on his lower back and it doesn't make much sense. The curve in his buttcks is too sharp.

The checkerboard background is a really nasty touch and feels extremely unreal: no sharp distinction between the tiles, no indication of what material they could be made of... it's like someone slapped a texture there and said "we're done"!

As for the teacher there... her expression seriously lacks readability: you've got to be careful when using glasses, to frame the eyes properly. Also why is NC's shadow pitch black while hers seems to fade?