The composition is lovely and well balanced. The contrast in most of the picture is stunning. Those butterflies though... They stand out more than the main subject does. It's mostly because they are in a whole different color scheme, forcing them to the front of the viewer's eye. If you could find a way to maybe mute them a bit or a way to integrate a little of the blue into the girl, then it would be better balanced. Maybe a tad of blue in her eyes so that her stare becomes just as noticeable as the butterflies. Well done though! Very nice.
I love the kind of dark style you put in it. The hair could be a little bit more dramatized, but it'd actually be a bit less realistic. And I don't think Alice takes good care of her hair, anyway XD So it wouldn't look at that great. But you did it very well! I love the streaks, her dark eyes, her bloody arm, her pose fits her perfectly, and those butterflies are just amazing. It's because they could be both butterflies and flowers or just patterns, which is great! Multiple uses Or whatever way you'd put it xD An'way, yeah, this is lovely ^^